Another entry for Weekend Writing Warriors. WeWriWa is a blog site open to all authors/writers published or unpublished. Follow the simple instructions on their blog to sign up and then post a snippet of writing on your own blog to join in on the fun.
Continuing with an excerpt from my book Fiendish and I'm picking up again with that. The excerpt picks up in the middle of chapter 3 and I will continue til the end of the chapter. Seth has safely gotten Calida home after their date we now pick up with the night coming to a close.
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“Thank you.”
He stood close to me again, and I found
myself holding my breath, waiting to see what he would do this time. I was
disappointed again when he backed away without making a move. I chastised
myself again for my crazy thoughts. Maybe Macy was right, it had been too long
for me if I wanted a near-stranger to kiss me.
“Well, um, goodnight Seth. And thank you
again for linner,” I said with a smile then turned and headed towards my house.
“Calida?”
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Ugh! ~Snippet cliffhanger alert!~ Nicely done, Meka! Good 8 :-)
ReplyDeletesorry...had to work within the 8 sentence limit.
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Will she get that kiss now? Hmm.
ReplyDeleteA kiss would be the perfect ending since she's thought he was going to twice already.
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Pucker up, woman. You're about to be kissed. What fun. Delicious bit of business going on, Meka.
ReplyDeleteLOL...is she???? He has teased her twice already so maybe this time he will deliver. Glad you are enjoying it.
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Ok, I can't stand your constant teasing any longer so, guess what I just bought! :-) Nice 8, as always!
ReplyDeleteLOL...teasing??? I'm working within the guidelines of the 8 sentences LOL. Thanks for buying and hope you enjoy it
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Ooh! What's he gonna do now?! I think there's kissin' on the horizon, and maybe some other things too! *rubs palms together* :D
ReplyDeleteother things???? Calida isn't the kind to sleep with a guy on the first date, but then again he is quite sexy and it's been a while for her, so maybe she'd make an exception! LOL
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You keep turning the tension screws! Great snippet.
ReplyDeleteI try. :)
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Uh oh, that fatal "one last remark"....I'm dying to know if this is a bad guy or a good guy! Way to ratchet up the tension...great 8!
ReplyDeletehe's a bit of both depending on his mood. :)
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Calling her name when she walks away...he's totally up to something! Great excerpt.
ReplyDeleteKeep smiling,
Yawatta