tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7775652771554156477.post5178866522875922383..comments2024-01-10T05:02:14.486-05:00Comments on Meka's Musings: Weekend Writing Warriors entry #2Meka Jameshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04592225193233705022noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7775652771554156477.post-828110138552813132014-08-03T18:20:39.754-04:002014-08-03T18:20:39.754-04:00It is terrible, and what's worse some people a...It is terrible, and what's worse some people actually act like this mother. Resenting the child for simply being born. :(<br /><br />No worries on the late comment. Hope you have a great school year! Meka Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04592225193233705022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7775652771554156477.post-38487477062165188692014-08-02T11:32:48.970-04:002014-08-02T11:32:48.970-04:00Sounds like a horrible situation. How can anyone b...Sounds like a horrible situation. How can anyone blame a baby for anything. Sorry I'm so late with my return visit. I've been as busy as a teacher the week before the first day of school.<br /><br />https://joycelansky.blogspot.comCatch My Wordshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06338761214938263819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7775652771554156477.post-41691973744381781202014-08-02T10:55:26.128-04:002014-08-02T10:55:26.128-04:00Glad she's someone people can connect to. :( S...Glad she's someone people can connect to. :( Sorry about your relationship with your mom. It's hard when a kid feels that way because of how their parents treat them. <br /><br />thanks for stopping by Meka Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04592225193233705022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7775652771554156477.post-30793719191812060342014-08-02T10:53:59.545-04:002014-08-02T10:53:59.545-04:00Thanks!Thanks!Meka Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04592225193233705022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7775652771554156477.post-59742329111770309772014-08-02T10:53:42.580-04:002014-08-02T10:53:42.580-04:00Thank you. Thank you. Meka Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04592225193233705022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7775652771554156477.post-1687742985575368542014-07-30T15:23:44.940-04:002014-07-30T15:23:44.940-04:00Great snippet. I loved the drama. I can relate to ...Great snippet. I loved the drama. I can relate to the main character. My mom and I didn't have the best relationship when I was little. Sometimes I thought she resented me and my brother. Good job bringing out the emotion. I can't wait to read the next installment.<br /><br />Keep smiling,<br />YawattaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7775652771554156477.post-17099280100618819462014-07-29T22:43:02.305-04:002014-07-29T22:43:02.305-04:00You really brought out emotion in this scene. Nice...You really brought out emotion in this scene. Nicely done! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7775652771554156477.post-66461832709574532462014-07-27T22:58:54.632-04:002014-07-27T22:58:54.632-04:00Wow. So very heavy but powerful. The emotion of th...Wow. So very heavy but powerful. The emotion of this is raw, especially combined with last week's snippet. Great job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07481361022996075084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7775652771554156477.post-87369468442217011072014-07-27T22:46:23.281-04:002014-07-27T22:46:23.281-04:00it is very sad she didn't care enough before t...it is very sad she didn't care enough before this<br /><br />thanks for stopping byMeka Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04592225193233705022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7775652771554156477.post-25657641329029675732014-07-27T22:45:30.638-04:002014-07-27T22:45:30.638-04:00Our nameless character hasn't had it easy. :( ...Our nameless character hasn't had it easy. :( She's tried to deal with life as best she could but it's led to this.<br /><br />thanks for stopping byMeka Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04592225193233705022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7775652771554156477.post-83789254360275458652014-07-27T22:44:31.768-04:002014-07-27T22:44:31.768-04:00aww thanks. I'm glad it made an impact with yo...aww thanks. I'm glad it made an impact with you. <br /><br />you are correct in the life this poor girl led. Her mother was not the best towards her, she's had a hard life. Suicide and abuse are dark subjects which is why I wanted to give the warning since I wasn't sure. <br /><br />Bad things happen every day, but I didn't want to offend anyone. Better safe than sorry. <br /><br />This story has 2 more weeks worth of sentences.<br /><br />thanks for stopping byMeka Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04592225193233705022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7775652771554156477.post-49733238937917403142014-07-27T22:39:57.259-04:002014-07-27T22:39:57.259-04:00Thank you! :)Thank you! :)Meka Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04592225193233705022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7775652771554156477.post-88852745448401578742014-07-27T22:39:44.516-04:002014-07-27T22:39:44.516-04:00Thank you. I was trying to go for quick, maximum i...Thank you. I was trying to go for quick, maximum impact.<br /><br />I wasn't sure with the subject matter on what was or wasn't allowed. I'm glad to know there aren't restrictions. I will continue to post the warning just so readers are aware of the subject matter.<br /><br />thanksMeka Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04592225193233705022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7775652771554156477.post-51075896567463592422014-07-27T20:07:00.564-04:002014-07-27T20:07:00.564-04:00How sad that the mother didn't show her love w...How sad that the mother didn't show her love when she could...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7775652771554156477.post-9797454377779871632014-07-27T18:06:31.263-04:002014-07-27T18:06:31.263-04:00This was so intense. I felt for the main character...This was so intense. I felt for the main character. it must be so hard to have to deal a parent who treats you so poorly. Great snippet tho!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17882454941377941655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7775652771554156477.post-6650911360602340552014-07-27T17:58:29.633-04:002014-07-27T17:58:29.633-04:00This is a powerful story. I remembered your snipp...This is a powerful story. I remembered your snippet from last week, so it stayed with me. It sounds like her mother is emotionally abusive :( Suicide is a dark topic, but it happens, just like many other bad things in life. I wrote a story about it too, and added a trigger warning. I have a friend whose cousin committed suicide a few months back, and I told her not to read my story. It can definitely trigger someone who was affected by it, so it was considerate of you to warn others. I'm hoping the protagonist is able to find some peace. Looking forward to next week ^^Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7775652771554156477.post-10490951240883140142014-07-27T16:43:25.327-04:002014-07-27T16:43:25.327-04:00Sad, but very evocative and well written snippet.Sad, but very evocative and well written snippet.Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7775652771554156477.post-25681492882601192562014-07-27T11:20:06.289-04:002014-07-27T11:20:06.289-04:00You make clear in eight sentences the family dynam...You make clear in eight sentences the family dynamics. Nice job. We have all kinds of writers on WeWriWa but it was considerate of you to post a warning first giving the reader an opportunity to pass if they felt it might trigger something. 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