Saturday, November 29, 2014

Weekend Writing Warriors entry #20



Another entry for Weekend Writing Warriors. WeWriWa is a blog site open to all authors/writers published or unpublished. Follow the simple instructions on their blog to sign up and then post a snippet of writing on your own blog to join in on the fun.

Continuing with an excerpt from my book Fiendish and I'm picking up again with that. The excerpt picks up in the middle of chapter 3 and runs til the end of the chapter. Last week, much to Calida's excitement, Seth asked for her number. Now we get to see how the date ends. Will she get her kiss?


This final excerpt from the chapter is less than 8 sentences, but I didn't want to add in any from chapter 4.

If you are just joining me, click below to be taken to the beginning of this excerpt.


Seth punched in a number then I heard ringing coming from inside his car. Our fingers touched when he gave me back my phone, and we let them linger there for a moment.
“Until next time,” he said with a smile before climbing back into his car.

I stood there watching until his taillights faded away. I did a happy dance in my front yard, not caring if the neighbors thought I was crazy, before I ran into the house to tell Macy.

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11 comments:

  1. Delightful, Meka. Just enough to make the reader want more. And I too did a happy dance.

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    1. LOL thanks! She didn't get her kiss, but the night did end well for her.

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  2. Love the happy dance : ) Cute. And sometimes just six sentences does as well as eight! Great job!

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    1. :) The night ended on a high note for her, she was very excited. Glad you enjoyed it

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  3. I'm glad she's happy! Excellent excerpt, nice way to end their evening together...

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    1. She was floating on cloud 9 that he asked for her number. Not the kiss she wanted, but she's still happy.

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  4. Hee! I've totally happy-danced after a really good date. Love how giddy she is. :) Great work!

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    1. I think we all have! That happiness and hopefulness at the start of a new relationship.

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  5. I can really feel her happiness. He has some swagger :)

    Keep smiling,
    Yawatta

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